Describe a time when someone’s words had a lasting impact on you.

 A time when someone's words had a lasting impact on me was when my dad told me that I don't have to be the best at everything. I have always been very competitive in everything I do, including sports, arts, and academics. I remember my first final I ever took during Freshman year, I got an 82 on it. It doesn't seem so bad, but for me, it was heartbreaking. I always try to get A's on everything I do because I have always done well in school, and I want it to stay like that. My dad didn't want me to beat myself up about getting a B on the final, and he said that as long as I tried my best and I know why I scored badly, it's ok.

Today in class, we practiced evaluating evidence that is supposed to support a claim and identifying why it wasn't a good example. 

I learned that the evidence cannot be another claim but has to dig deeper into the claim.

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