Describe a real moment in your life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story. Tell what happened, and why it felt like a turning point in your life?

A real moment in my life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story was when I moved high schools. I transferred to Lakeside from St. Pius at the beginning of my junior year to improve my grades, my college application, and my social circle. It felt like a turning point in my life because it was a big change with a lot of challenges. I have so far succeeded through these challenges, and I have come out smarter and better.

In class, we practiced commentary for a rhetorical analysis.

I learned how to write commentary with transition words.

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